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Heh, I hope the problems with your computer will be solved quickly. I can't wait for next chapter(s). But why I'm writing this (not that I don't have any nice things to say to you, it's just that I seldom write reviews at all): I like that idea of yours with a jealous Sesshomaru, too. And I would like to see a human as the trouble maker. I think it would be quite original and I just imagine some of the possible Sesshomaru's reactions. I would also like it more if it was a man, and not a woman, but ... well, as I see it, even if you write it like this, with the third person's involvement, and if you listen to your readers at least a little bit (like a good little author :-D), than the third person is probably going to be Kouga. Well, doesn't matter, I think I'll enjoy it all the same. Good luck.

S.

Good to hear from you! As you yourself say, this story is a FIRST for this pair! You are a PIONEER! This landmark piece MUST be completed!!
I like the idea of Takai being the "other man." Kouga would be fun, don't get me wrong, but I'd much rather the focus stay on Sess and Shippou; another "major" character may clutter things up a bit.
It would be a tragedy not to have a lemon! If that's not in the cards, though, there MUST be a fight/sparring sequence, since they'll both need an outlet for their frustrations. Perhaps physical activity of ONE kind could lead to physical activity of ANOTHER kind... heh heh heh...
Good luck!

I really want to read the part where Shippou confronts Sesshoumaru. Ooooh that is a sight to see. As for the second love interest..mm....I'm going to have to say Shippou's second in command. You have more to work with and if anything happens to Shippou, at least he'll be there to "rescue him"---and with an excuse! What more can you ask for?

Keep up the good work, toots!

okay, you've got my interest so far! Nicely written, and I am definitely curious, although a little sad over the loss of the other characters. hey, I'll get over it...not like you didn't warn me! Anyway, Shippou's character sounds fun as an adult and i"m looking forward to more writing.

oooooo, please update soon!

Pleeeeeeeease update I am begging you. For the first time I found a Shippo/Sesh sotry and i got so excited. Please update it is wonderful so far. Really sad about Inuyasha though. :(

dont leave me hanging

Very interesting.... reading the summary/pairing gave me a "wtf??" moment, but I'm very glad I gave it a chance.
Can't wait to see where this goes!

I'm lovin it! I hope Shippo gets a chance to show off his new powers to Sesshomaru... maybe snapping his fingers (paws? / did he grow hands and feet?) and turning somebody into a torch. Speaking of hot lovin', puh-leeze continue!

I love it!!! There are no other words to say except.. I love it!!!!