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for A Blind Heart

by JadedInu

schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*wipes at tears* Damn.

Now where is Sesshomaru taking Kagome? I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Please update soon Inu-Lover.

Phoenix
person NightQueen
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter! You're right Goodbyes are always hard, but you did a lovely job writing this chapter. You brought tears to my eyes. Well done.
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a chapter! At least the air has been cleared between Kagome and Kikyo and Inu Yasha and Kagome. Now Kagome needs only work on her feelings towards Sesshomaru. And of course, beat the shit right out of Naraku! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Please update soon.
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG hold on a sec...*finds eye that popped out and places it back in* Damn, what happened? This is not the same writer that began this story, no no no. Wow, its like a brand new you! Dude! My jaw literally dropped. Wow. I am freakin amazed. *tries to reach through the screen and search the pages* Where did you go? Un-fucking-believeable! I absolutely adored it! I can't believe this was you. Wow. I just can't stop saying it. I guess all that's left to say is great job. I can't wait to see the next one. Damn. *walks out the door shaking head*

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness
person Slightly_Sinful
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uppie uppie UPDATE!!! plz
person Badgrl74
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you keep going back and forth between their POV's. It helps me get a better all around understanding. Awesome story!
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who? Who is coming? I bet that I could guess. But anyway, this story is coming along great! I can't wait to "see" what happens to everyone, let alone, what is going to happen when Koga discovers that Sesshoamru has decided to "court" Kagome? Ohhh ... the suspence! Please update again soon, I really want to know what happens next!

Until we meet again,

Phoenix
person Ceridwyn
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was so cool. I love how you portrayed everyone. And a spell of Longing. Hmm...what exactly was Sesshoumaru longing for that brought he and Kagome together? I really like this story, it has become one of my favorites. Everything is going so smoothly. Do me a favor though? Break up some of the paragraphs. Sometimes the words run together and it makes it hard to read. Also, I noticed a few miss quotations. Be careful. One more thing, you're doing pretty good at this, but make sure you make new paragraphs when a differnt person is speaking. Oh oh, one last thing...I love Sailor Moon!!! I wish I could see that last season! I never got to see the starlights. Damn it all. I can't wait to see what you've got next!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness
person Shanalir
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like the new chapter. Can't wait to see what comes next.
person Badgrl74
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad they cleared the air somewhat. I wonder, is it Koga that's coming? I guess I'll have to wait, damn!