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for A Blind Heart

by JadedInu

person No Winged Angel
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait til you write more on it! I have always been a fan of Sesshy/Kags and this is the best story I've seen with them being together. It is deeply romantic while also dealing with the basest of desires.
person Badgrl74
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice citrus! You almost took me there! Whatever hussie comes along, I hope she kicks their ass!
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was one hell of a chapter! Damn I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens next!

Unitl we "meet" again.
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. This story just keeps getting better and better. One thing, Sesshoumaru's sword is called the Tensaiga. Inuyasha has the Tetsaiga. Just thought I would let you know. I look forward to your next chapter! Love it!

Faerie Demoness
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn! This story just keeps getting better! I liked the "killing blow" to Inu Yasha after he fell out of the tree. *snort* That would have been something to "see". I can't wait to find out what you have in store for us next!

Until Later!
person saiyajin princess
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy green guacamole.... btw whats with the semi cliffy at the end of the lemon... bad authoress for that... extremely good ficcy.. must have more...
person Pucie
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I just love this story. . .I check everyday to see when it gets updated!! You have great descriptive powers, and you state everything clearly, I also like the fact that you already have them 'mirroring' each others feelings. . .very nice touch. The only thing I can see is that occasionally you get two words transposed, or leave a word out, like 'I knew we needed to get back to the back pack to journey to Maru's home', was it supposed to be "back pack" or just "pack", really it's no biggie, because I've only seen it a couple of times. . .Anyway, Thank You Thank You Thank You for updating so quickly!
person Shanalir
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good new chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
person Badgrl74
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that last part! What a teaser you are!Great chapters. I actually cried when she had to go.
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Truly amazing...I absolutely adore this story. I have to say that when she was saying her goodbyes, I cried. Albeit a couple of tears, but I still did. Very well written. I did however notice a couple of times where you completely forgot to put your conversation pieces in quotations. Otherwise, great job. Can't wait to see what's next.

Ja ne!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness