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for A Blind Heart

by JadedInu

schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ambush?! More ... I need more chapters. Please!!
person Badgrl74
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How funny! Koga needs to learn what keeping his word means.
person Angie
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON.. i really enjoyed reading these chapters...i can't wait to read how it turns out!!!
person Pucie
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better. . .I'm addicted lol And you are most welcome!
person Taiyoukai Nichne
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you would send me a note to tell me when you update this story. Thanks and just wanted to let you know that i loved it later Nichne
person Metis
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(blinks) I like the idea so far... how can he only be 250? Inuyasha's a little over 200! (50 of which was spent stuck to a tree mind you).
person Metis
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Thanks for the arm! I LOVE that!
person Metis
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(grin) Ah, the tail. What of the ears?
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Number one of all things.....O.o YOU MURDERED MY NAME!!!!! ACK!!!!! Secondly...great chapter. This is getting better with each new chapter you write. Also, I just wanted to point out a common mistake that A LOT of people make. The correct way of using breath and breathe. Breath is what exactly goes in and comes out of you. To breathe is actually performing the act. Other than a few places where you forgot punctuation marks, or misused a word, it was great. If you would like me to beta your story, I just wanted to let you know that since I now have a job, (yea me!) it would take me at most 24 - 48 hours to return it to you. Keep up the good work!

~Much Love~

F A E R I E D E M O N E S S ^_^
person AIdeen
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far!!! Please keep up-dating whenever you can!!! It is so good!!!!