rate_review Reviews

i love it can't what to read more please please updet soon i wont to now how long he going to have her run
around?

Plot is good, though I think something ate your punctuation.

Shit, that was some messed up. But, I absolutely LOVE IT. This is so creative. I wish I have a talent like this. It really isn’t fair! Maybe I can swap brains with you or something. I adore this first chapter, you have to update soon. I need to know what happens.

Well actually I think I know what happens. But, I still want to read this. So, please update as quick as you can. I have never said this to anyone before, because I love ‘stories’. But, I think this would make a great one-shot instead of a story. Maybe, maybe not?

Anyways, again you have a wonderful piece of work so far. You have a creative ability that I haven’t seen in a while and it is a nice breather. So, I congratulate you on your success and hope good things come to you in the future.

Please again, update soon. It really is killing me not knowing what is going to happen. I want TO KNOW *growls*


Bi

This is cute.. I hope you have more chapters for this story.. I enjoyed reading it.. Plz hurry and update the next chapter.. Dont leave it at a one-shot...
Mari

awww thats sooo cute funny that today is my b-da to!!! haha but keep on goin wanna know wat happens