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for Birthday card

by tsikinoodango

person angel
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was sooo sweet in till inuyasha came .. hmm that was inuyasha doing there ....please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Badgrl74
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That dress sounds beautiful, you should be a designer. Lover's park sounds fun........
person jstdreamgrl
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i do beleave this story needs to be reviewed now that i am hooked !!!! i love you story and await more chapters. I tip my hat to you and your stupendous story (((((awaiting chapter 6,7,8,9,amd more))))
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! DAMN IT! Just when it was about to get good! I really reallyreally REALLY want for you to update again really soon! (hee, hee! enough 'really's to get my point across, ne?) And I can't wait to find out what you "have in sote for us".

Until later.
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Hell of a good chapter! Can't wait to read the next one! Until then, later!
person AIdeen
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!! Please up-date again sooon!! I have to know what happens next!!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Badgrl74
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a birthday! Wish it was mine. Except for the Koga part!
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was funny write more please
person angel
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel