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for Birthday card

by tsikinoodango

person angel
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~ that was so sad...please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person iceraqs
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...imagining sesshomaru like that, instead of sympathizing with his heartbreak, i'd go rolling on my knees, laughing like hell! haha. anyway, it's really odd why kagome suddenly felt to leave him behind? besides, with his demon heritage, he might be able to catch up on her, isn't? anyway, that's why you have to update soon, right? gotta explain things, haha, evil author, makes the readers go wild for their anticipation of the updates. ;o)
person AIdeen
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens next between them!! Please up-date soon I have to know what happens next!!!
person angel
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it... im glad inuyasha did not mess up her birthday to much even is if did change that plans some ..... please please update soon ... later for now

angel
person iceraqs
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's a little disturbing (yeah, somewhat annoying to read) but hey, the idea of your story compensates with it! i know i'm not really good in grammar but heck! not everyone with good grammar could come up with such ideas in making up a story. thumbs up! ;o)
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person Badgrl74
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You're awesome. Kikyou needs to be bitch-slapped though.
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A few spelling 'oop's', but a really good chapter! 'Bout time they got to it. Now, I wonder what is going to happen next? Hmm ... Oh well. Brain is too tired to even try. I can't wait for the next chapter.

BTW, thankyou for updating early! I was thinking abou this story most of today, and wondering about the next chapter, but here it is!

Until we meet again,

Phoenix
person InuYoukai
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh what is he up to.... Cannot wait. Good Start
person kagome.is.better
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story cant wait for the next chappy!!!!