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for Birthday card

by tsikinoodango

person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person angel
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... man .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person C'Asia
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have to finish i wnt to know what happen
person iceraqs
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me too, kagome, why do you have to leave sesshomaru like that? i still don't get it. anyway, i'm still glad that you'll be reunited with him. hehe. please update soon! ;o)
person Me
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should by any means look for a beta your writing is not good, you have too many typing mistakes the story is not bad but the writting makes it look so
person FAL
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz Update ASAP!!!
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Please, please, PLEASE update again soon! This fic is so addictive!

Until we meet again.
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo ... I can't wait for the next "Card", but until then, please, please PLEASE update again soon!!
person AIdeen
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! I love how theu are getting closer!!! Please up-date soon please!!! Have to know what happens next!!!
person Badgrl74
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sad! But I know she will find him again.....