Reviews for Birthday card - Inuyasha

person slm111

schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM

wow talk about hentai. loved it very good bravo continue on now please.

person hi-ya

schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM

that is so not an ending!!! wat the hell kind of ending is that?! thats just the middle, maybe close to the end, but not end!!! no offense, i know that was wat, ur 1st, maybe 2nd story here?! but that still doesn give you a reason to have such a sucky ending, that sequel better come soon, and it beter be good, better yet, just continue this story, no need to waste everyone's time looking for the new title and all, since this is in no way complete (at least not by normal standards) u should just continue it on in here, dont stop it, your killing it before it even has a chance!!! it was a great story, and i loved it, but thats not an ending, not by a long sho, if u end it there, your droping yourself from one level of authors (ones w/ great plots and good stories,) to a lower level of authors (not sure which one at the oment) point being, your just hurting yourself, cause the first book in your series, or watever, its what people judge your work on, if itrs a bad beginning story, they wont read sequals, if its good, they will, if its a good story but sucky ending, that makes readers think "is that wat kind of books the others will be like?" and that makes them think of not reading anymore of them, and noone reading=a big waste of your time writing them. plus, this helps you 2, because u seem sad your ending it, well dont, because its not done yet, ok, thats all i'll write, plz hurry with either the sequel, or the next chapter, which ever you decide to do.

person PhoenixWolf

schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Aha ha ha ha! Kagome tricked Inu Yasha when she was little into wearing the subduing necklace! *wipes at tears* Oh, classic.

Now, I can't wait for the sequal to come out! Just remember to try and get more sleep between postings. Try not to post a chapter when you are too cross-eyed to look at the computer. We will wait an extra day or two for you to proof and add as you see fit.

What about your other story, Dark Times? I haven't seen any updates there for a while. *like I'm one to talk!* I really enjoy your stories and am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Until we meet again.

person angel

schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM

~lol~ that was great and she gave in the beads when she was 5 .. and he made clames when she is 5 man inu yasha holding her to a clame since she was 5 is not nice.....i cant wait in till the sequel ... in till then later for now

angel

person Aaliyah Starnight

schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM

oh my god i loved it but where is the lemon i wanted a lemon

person angel