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March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest of this???
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
as with all your stories while the ideas are interesting, they are a testament why having a bata is a very, very good thing. The spelling and grammar errors make them all but unreadable.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this fanfiction! =D I was
just wondering if you could put some
punctuation!?! I can some times tell
where a new sentence begins by a capitol
letter but thats it!!!!! The paragraphs seem to go
as this review. Oh you forgot an r in Secret admirer
The As DOES mine, little Miko, as
DOES mine... not doses XD
just wondering if you could put some
punctuation!?! I can some times tell
where a new sentence begins by a capitol
letter but thats it!!!!! The paragraphs seem to go
as this review. Oh you forgot an r in Secret admirer
The As DOES mine, little Miko, as
DOES mine... not doses XD
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please use spellcheck before you upload your stories--it makes it much more enjoyable to read if I'm not trying to decode your words. Looks pretty good so far, tho I'm only on the first chapter.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kagaome is a really stupid girl...who the heck would do that?! I swear, this girl is just asking to be gang-raped.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I sad to see this was the last chapter, but glad your making a sequel. I can't wait to read more of your stories, so keep up the good work.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU SUCK!! ;.; I LOVE THIS STORY...YOU SUCK FOR ENDING IT PLeaseeeeeeeeee HAVE UPDATE SOON ONCE AGAIN YOU SUCK BUD GOD I LOVE YOU
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was great i love it and i cant wait in till the sequel ... later for now
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man that is up with hojo and why did sess have to leave her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I THOUT IT WAS GOING TO BE ONE OF THOUS WHAT IS THE WORD WELL ENY WAY I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND YOU HAVE A LOT OF SPELLING ERRORS AND GRAMER then agin I can't spell to save my life so love it can't wait and think about a beta so PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!^_~