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for Dessert Before Dinner

by kimisan

person madmiko
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written group scene. I was surprised that Kurama and hiei ended up with Keiko, though, since they were both interested in kagome. Hot stuff!
person danzapalooza
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!
person Katie
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You call this a SIMPLE one-shot!? I need a freaking cold shower RIGHT. NOW. That was amazing! If I beg on my hands and knees, will you be willing to do a second chapter? :3
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ummmmm...... That was hot! That was fucking hot. That was break out my toys hot! That was having to buy new batteries for my toys hot! And I'm so glad that Yusuke had the biggest cock. Oh yeah! Too fucking hot!!!!!!!! You rule! Did I mention that I thought this was HOT!!!!!!!!!! ^_~
person MsMina
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[Fanning self]. wow. Will add more later when can properly express my apreciation.
person Chi-Ame
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. Dat was fucking good! Shit dat was HOTT! Damn u write some Damn Good Lemon! Damn lucky kags n keiko. U r awsome! I cant even find lemons with this pairing! I glad u did this story! I like kags n keiko as fuck buddies better than 2getter. Not many ppl could have pulled off 5-some, n I think u did very well. Keep up da good work! N please inform me of any new fics of ur's!
person sango111
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG

please continue what do they have for dinner what exactly
did yusuke say to hiei and kurama?

not to critasize but i think it would have been better with kurama in his fox demon form
person Elli Mac
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the fanfic Please continue very soon It is one of the best fanfic I ever read Please and thank you.
person babygirl
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done. I really like this one. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I wanna be either one of them. Lucky girls, where can I sign up for an evening like that? Keep up the good work! *hands you Hiei cookies*