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Oh my god I really loved it, you had my toes curling! Well hope you update soon I real want to read some more:) GOOOD LUUck loves lots...jm.

WHAT ? It's this some kind of a sick joke ? HOW DARE YOU STOP A CHAPTER LIKE THAT ?!! Now..... Your story is so great ! You must really keep up the good work. Please update soon ! Just can't wait to read more of it ^^

Alrighty! I can already tell this is going to be one hell of a story. What a major cliffie too! I thought I was evil. I can't wait to see what you cook up next. BTW, I put you on my mailing list. I'm going to try to write more soon. Seeing as how some people aren't used to cliffies, you ought to make the next one even crueler than this one. Just to be reeeally evil.....~laughs like the evil person she is~

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness

*Growls* Now I know what it feels like to have a CLIFFY THROWN IN YOUR FACE. How irritating! It is frustrating and now I see what it does to people. Now I am going to be thinking, what the heck is going to happen? *Cries* this is not fair I want to know what happens.

Anyway, great work. I absolutely LOVE this story. It has so much potential to be a great success. I like how you have made Sango very …profound. Like all business type and yet with an elegant type of friendliness to her. Sango is one of my favorite female characters after Kagome of course. I found you portrayed her very well.

I have never read a story where Kagome was a cleaning lady. It was different to say in the least. Makes you think tat the author is more out of the box so to speak. *Maniacal Laugh* InuYasha is such an ass.

If you’re going to make this a actual story and not just like a two-shot or something. Please I am begging you; I know you said Kagome was a miko. But, please have Kagome strong. I have read to MANY stories where Kagome is a helpless girl who is always getting kidnapped.

But, before I nag you to death; this is your story. So, it is merely a suggestion, not a demand. All though it would be nice.

You have a great talent and a hint of creativity that I see in what you write. I congratulate you on your success on creating one heck of a first chapter. Truly and utterly a fine piece of work. I can’t wait to see what else you come up with. I will wait with open arms to see what your next chapter will be about.

Please update soon :)

it grat can't what to see what happens please up dit soon

its really cool i like it
and the name of the story??
what about "hotel shikon" jeje im not good in this -__-

well byee