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for Room Service

by PhoenixWolf

person Kryssala
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate trying to figure out titles. that is usualy the last thing I do. You have a good start. I look forward to your next chapter.
person Solaris
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is a good start to a great story.
I was recommended to read this story by my sister Rhonda and I must state that I like this story very much.
Please continue with it.

Beth
person swtdrm01
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story.
person infinite silence
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like your story i hope that you do continue to write. Well I must be off, until i strike again!!!!

::swings away on a rope:: ***BAM! Smack into the next building!***
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Indeed a very evil cliffie and like many others... wow I thought I was bad. *egrins* Interesting concept, I'm dying to see who's standing behind her now and how he gets around her defenses. Hmmm, title suggestions.... how about "The Continental Serve", just a hint at like special room serve *chortles* I mean she does work for the Hotel and all. *whistles innocently* Without further understanding of the full story idea that's all I can suggest for now. But maybe with the next chappie I could offer something else.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Cancan227
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAhhh!!! MEANIE!!!
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Longer chapters girly is the key to patients lol.... I luv it keep it up... ^__^
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really butchered the word "service". *coughs* Nice chappie again, and equally evil cliffhanger. -- Oh my.. Kagome how flexible you are. --
I wonder just how blunt he'll actually be with her and his questions. You might want to explain just how he seems to know she's a miko and why the heck a priestess would be cleaning hotel rooms. And kudos for getting the next installment out so quickly.
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe!!! This is gonna be good! *grins evilly* Poor Kags... Well maybe... Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what kind of mischief these two manage to get into. Can't wait! Ja ne, Michi

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