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YOU SHOULD NAME IT UNEXPECTED DESIRE

sorry messed up but yeah u sould name it unexpected desire

EEERRRR, longer chapters girl boy who ever! I realy like, so keep writing!

Nice, realy I like it! Please keep up the good work hi! And as for the name how about "Hotel Erotica!" Or "Hotel Madness!" Or maby go with that name that one person came up with "All work and no play" AHH that is very good who ever you are, I laughed. No realy that was a good name... Keep it up!

Ack! Another cliffie, oh you are so evil. If I knew which time period you were in, I could probably help with the title as well...hmm...how about Hakumei Ryuu (Twilight Dragon for the hotel) or maybe...Aisuru Nikkou (Beloved Sunshine) I'm just putting words together from my little dictionary. I dunno...it's your story. I like, I like, I like....nah....I LOVE IT!!! But you keep making cliffies *sobs* that's so mean! Maybe make it a little longer, and maybe I won't throw my twinkie at you again. ~Softer than a tomato at least~ Can't wait for the next one!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness

he sure is agressive. wow!
How about "Tokio Cinderella" or "Shikon Cendrillon" which means cinderella in french.

i love it keep it up updet soon please

How about a Clean Passions? or All work and No play?

I like the story continue with it!

~drops jaw~ I can't believe you left it as a cliffie like that! Damn you! Argh, that was so freakin mean! Damn damn damn. It was good though. Just out of curiosity, just what was she cleaning to have her in such a position? I clean my bathroom and I don't find a position like that. You. Are. Good. I love your stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness

awesome story so far... as for suggestions for a title...hmm how about kagome's hotel encounter I would have to read more to come up with something better. update soon.