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awww how sweet sess knows wat to say in this flic however you came up with this is really good your a really good writer
UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT!!!!!1111

I like "Room Service"...the pun is just delicious.

Really good story, I must say. I'm really enjoying it, and looking forward to the next chapter. As far as a title goes, I like "Hotel Romance" the best. Mainly because it starts in the hotel, but doesn't stay there (since they do leave it at various points). "Room Service" implies nothing more than a oneshot lemon where they meet, do their thing, and go their separate ways. "Hote Romance" implies a broader spectrum and greater depth. To me at least. And if no one else understands me, at least I do! (I think....) Anyway, Update Soon, Please!!!

O.O Wow, thanks. I am so glad I could help. I was trying to think of other names for the title...but am coming up blank. Hmm...I'm looking at my video games...Fever Fantasy...Unlimited Fantasy...or maybe you could do a play off of "Maid in Manhatten"? Miko in Tokyo? I dunno...oh, if you'd like some help in the experience area, go to www.newgrounds.com and take a look around the adult and hentai sections. Maybe they'll help some. One writer wrote a story based off of the Jungle Girl game. Its bad, I know, but they're fun to play. I am one sick twisted puppy. Great story. I look forward to the next one.

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness

I like this story.. Pretty cool.. I like the story line that you have going... Cant wait for the next chapter...
I like Hotel Romance out of all three.. But I would like add one too.. How about "" Maid to Service You"".. Just wanted to give my idea.. LOL

Take Care
Mari

My vote goes for the title Room Serviced,update soon please.

Room Service is the best out of the three titles

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

your soooooooo mean stopping it there

but ill forgive you if 'o'

YOU UPDATE VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

What is it with these cliffies?
I want to read more!
Please post more of this story it is good.
I want to know what happens next.