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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read through the reviews and I got to say I realy loved that "Pleased to serve in every way" That was pure genus! But as for my name how about "My dirty little secret!" or "Going into the deep end"! And hey if you don't like any of my names its alright no hard feelings, just trying to help! Nice work though, up date soon!
~Love me tender~
~Love me tender~
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it that was so awesome
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i believe that Unexpected Desire has been done as a name before .... i like the name Room Service ... anywho good job i cant wait to read more keep up the good work! ^^
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good 'perverted' chapter. ;) I'm glad you're considering one of my ideas as a possible title. Hopefully other people understand the concept of the title.
If others are reading this review, the title "Room Serviced" is to imply that Kagome is 'servicing' Sesshomaru's room and no other cleaning lady should even think about going near that room to do any 'cleaning,' because she has it handled.
Keep up the good work (but still refrain from overusing certain words; a thesaurus is your friend), and update soon.
If others are reading this review, the title "Room Serviced" is to imply that Kagome is 'servicing' Sesshomaru's room and no other cleaning lady should even think about going near that room to do any 'cleaning,' because she has it handled.
Keep up the good work (but still refrain from overusing certain words; a thesaurus is your friend), and update soon.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this title! Room Serviced
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Room Serviced is a geat title for this story.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil....just pure evil all these cliffies! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!! (Ouch trying to get up from begging on knees, LOL)
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome love scene there for someone who doesn't have much...experience as you said, I would never have guessed, so therefore you must be a very good writer. Also for a title for your story, Unexpected Desires I believe has been done before, Room Service sounds like a one-shot lemon which it's not. I say Hotel Romance sounds like the better title
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Room serviced is definetly the best choice.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My vote is Room Serviced because I think that Unexpected Desire has been done and Hotel Romance sounds a little lame(I'm sorry if I offended you with the 'kind of lame' part).