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for Room Service

by PhoenixWolf

person Megan Consoer
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person reader00
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please! more!!!!! do you relly think that that is enough???!?!?!?!?!!?
person Little Jack 2
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 was a little to short for my tastes and a little boring but all in all it was alright.I hope that chapter 11 is longer.Please update soon.
person Kawaii Kilala
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, you could make them longer, but if it took you this long to post that, then you might want to make them one paragraghs...LOL! Just Kiding! Make them as long as you can!
Of course...you might have made it that long, just to leave us hangin, and as a cliff hanger!
Ok, well, you might want to be a bit more descriptive and such...that would really be good for this...
Well, good writing and typeing!
Update soon!
TTYL;
megan
person lala_land
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh wow thats so great So little!~!!!!! whats the hell is wrong with you!!! I love this stopry keeep it up
person Tori
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This Is ze Tori I would like to say that this story is beyond the story I thought it to be, It was good and then went to great! I like the plot and what you have done to the characters. Well thought out and planned. Thank you

P.S
Update when you can and continue onward!
person B. M.
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh..........great story........update soon
person Babygirl
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a realy good story. I can't wait till you update again. I do that it is soon. Untill then keep up the great work.
person Little Jack 2
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kikyo is such a f*ckin' whiny bitch ain't she? Please update your story soon.
person Little Jack 2
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor KINKY-WHORE NOT,that's definetly the perfect place to put them,in the next chapter you should have the waiters and waitresses "accidently" bump into Inuyasha and kinkyho several times as well as having them get food and drink spilled on them when they're "accidently" bumped into.