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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why why a cliffy T_T
Why why a cliffy T_T
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UGH! Chapter 11's cliffhanger is just cruel.
I must say that I really like your story, though. Even though it is a bit cliche, it's a cliche that works (FYI, I have no problem when authors use cliche story lines. There's a reason why it becomes cliche. It's because it works). Sesshoumaru as the chivalrous saviors and Kagome as the good-natured, beatiful woman who's been dealt a bad hand - I like the way you've built up their relationship thus far, even if it was a bit quick. I can't wait to see how much closer they get, and how the mating will occur. Wonderful story. I look forward to more!
I must say that I really like your story, though. Even though it is a bit cliche, it's a cliche that works (FYI, I have no problem when authors use cliche story lines. There's a reason why it becomes cliche. It's because it works). Sesshoumaru as the chivalrous saviors and Kagome as the good-natured, beatiful woman who's been dealt a bad hand - I like the way you've built up their relationship thus far, even if it was a bit quick. I can't wait to see how much closer they get, and how the mating will occur. Wonderful story. I look forward to more!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooo you can leave it like that what does she want from him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that was an evil cliffy but I loved it nonetheless. Well please update soon!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Arrrrrrrrrrgh! You just had to cut it off there, didn't you? Well anyway, I lve hoe their relationship is growing, and I can't wait untill the next one is posted!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOu.. extremly mean I can tell. The cliffes are starting to get a tad annoying just to tell you no offense attended. But the story is great so far keep it up but please at least have one chappie there isn't one and let the readers try to guess what happens like further your stry in their own head cliffhangers don't really do that they simply make me forget and not think about the story till you write again. there are some fics that make you actually dream about it crave for the next update but aren't left in cliffe to the exterme such as not even finishing a sentence. Please try next time
Arry
Arry
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How could you stop like that!, girl update
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was totally awesome you totally rock
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please add aoon!
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chap. i can't wait to see what happens next. I do hope that she says yes.