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I'm so glad you updated (though thanks to negligent email checking I'm late on reading and reviewing it). I really enjoyed the chapter, it seemed to open a number of possible directions for the story to go. On the other hand, having an unfinished story of my own floating around out there, I know how hard it is to get inspiration after you've hit a block. I don't have any suggestions to offer, other than don't stress too much about it. Let the pieces come as they will, as slow or fast as they want and don't try to force it. Push it too hard and you're most likely to frustrate yourself. I, for one, will wait any amount of time for the next chapter, and in the meantime, enjoy rereading the story often. Good luck, and I'll send good wishes your way for inspiration!

very good story, just alittle fast paced. everything has happened in what 3 or 4 days. lol
try slowing down explore the couples relationships let them enjoy each other. kags is on
vacation have her let her hair down and let the bad guys go into hiding for alittle while,
so they can form a plan. but by all means let poor poor kikyo :( have her reunion with kags and
inuyasha right away.lol

you have a good start.

Sesshoumaru shouldn't say so much. He never does, why start now?

Great chapter. Miroku's lucky he didn't get sliced open. Love the character interaction, and can't wait to see what comes next!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Show Kiki-hoe once in a while ...

I love this chapter please update soon.

I hate you!! you give cliffies away like a sprinkler! you mean! =P




peace!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?