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by InuCakes

person Anon
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue writin!!! its hot!!!
person Nikki.
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story you have here.
its definetly interesting i hope you get your 5 reveiws cause id like to read your updates.
person Brittany
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE, 'CAUSE THAT WAS AWESOME!
person bluezinthos
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting...i'm guessing that inuyasha is older and very well known around the area? or is he simply older and in the same school? you've set him up to be quite popular, so i was curious how he was so well known. i see the stryline starting to develop around the 'training'. does kagome know he is a half demon? other than a few spelling errors (there/their and forgetting a few 'ed' at the end of words, a mistake i am famous for when i really get typing) your format and atye improved between the first and second chapters. i can't wait to see the blackmail!!
person kiek0
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the most interesting works i've seen. Keep up the great work.
person Sam
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What could have Kagome left on the computer that means blackmail? her Diary? Ok so does he go to school.. because kinky-ho knows him.. yet the way he reacted to the bell makes us think different.. and he is hiding his demon half *the bandanna*? and can go around saying that she is his? SOOOO Im just a little confused :) just a little. but I really like the story.. like alot :)
person Ceres
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it... why did he choose her anyways? is it somth to do with her miko powers or perhaps her scent? update soon plz!!!
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person Remy
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it something not i don't know maybe something a little different, Inuyasha isn't some jock or a a geek or someone getting picked on all the time about being different in turn its Kagome different i like it
person JT Moore
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the the story because of the passion behind their eyes they carry i hope maybe to see more in then ext chapter keep up the good work post me when you got it up
person Kita Tsuki
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds so awesome! Update soon! Peace.