rate_review Reviews

Wow! I really like this fic so far! Lik REALLY like so far! I always did luv bad boy Inuyasha. I also like the fact that Kagome isn't ur typial beautiful girl, not that I don't like those stories 2, it's just nice 2 c a change! I can't wait 2 find out what happens next!

Hey great story, I have seen a lot of plots were Kagome is the nerdy freak of the school and Inuyasha is the popular guy of the school but your story is one of my favorites.

Awesome story! I can't wait 'till you get another chapter up! <3

Yeay! I hope that you finish this Fanfic! I can't wait to see how you end it! Well now that I've reviewed ya better write some more! See ya!

this story is great.. update ASAP!

interesting so where's the rest?

Please update!! I really want to know what Inuyasha is going to do with Kagome. And by what Inuyasha said about seeing Kagome naked and all, does that mean she isn't a virgin anymore? Or that they had oral sex or something? Jus a little confused is all.

Uncle_Yasha,

I like what you've done with the story so far, and I think it has a pretty good plot line to hold it. I think I would like to see a bit more description mixed in, but there's enough to be interesting. (Please don't fall into the trap of so many other authors on here and start writing. 'she was wearing. . ..and he was wearing. . .' That's such poor writing and you have a wonderful style going on). I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Can’t wait to read more of this story, and I also can’t wait to see what inu has planed for his little prey!!!!!!!!!!!!

i like the story alot. it's one of my favorite plotlines (bad boy goes after good girl) but i have two...i wouldn't call them complaints but rather issues. (1) the grammar is rather off. Just run the average spellcheck adn it'll pop up on your screen. Capitalize names, start anything in "quotations" in a new line, use your apostrophes and commas- fixing little stuff like that would really bring up the overall presentation of the fic adn also make it a little easier to read. (2) stop begging for a certain number of reviews please! Either you like Inuyasha, enjoy writing and want to share your story and that is why you post here OR you're just here for the adulation. Now I imagine it's the former. But holding your updates hostage against a numbr of reviews received is just silly. Your story obviously gets the numbers adn if people are hooked by so few chapters, they'll keep coming back. Asking for review in general? that's fine. Stating you'll only post if you get 'x' number of reviews? tacky.
That said: please update soon.