rate_review Reviews

Before I begin my review I just want to say I know how hard it is to lose someone close to you. I think he would be happy that you are not only sharing his story with everyone but that you will try your best to complete it too. As weird as it sounds I sometimes wonder when/if things like this happen what would be the outcome. I'm glad that there are people like yourself that make the positive choice. Well...I said a lot on that subject. Now about the story itself...don't take this the wrong way I have read better but for some reason I do like this story. It is FUN to read. Which is why I will continue to do so. I think we all have a soft spot for the classic "greek gone glam" story. However this particular work seems to state that she really does think she is plain rather than the girls that seem to have a strong spirit but no confidence to match. Poor Kagome is really getting a complete overhaul on her being as a whole. And I noticed that though there a refferences made about his demonic features that him being a hanyou seems to be a secret. Is that correct? But does Kagome know but not comment? They have been to intimate for her not to have felt the fangs and claws. Her not knowing about the hearing and smelling I can understand but perhaps he was going to make it a factor later since it seems he and his family are rich and powerful. Well as I said before I do like this story ar lot and I can't wait to read more. And I wasn't trying to be mean earlier. Just because it won't win any awards doesn't mean it isn't good. Lots of people write stories just for the fun of it and I do love these kinds of stories. So shoot the romantic in me...I will be looking for updates! And sorry about any errors in here. I'm not a grammar goddess. But if you don't mention any mistakes I make here I won't point out the ones in the story either. Deal...?

I'm sorry that the original author had passed away, and im glad that you decided to finish his work.

Its not what im used to reading, I like more of the kimono wearing inuyasha then the new motorcycle driving one.

But still, cant pass up reading a good story can I? Hope you like my review, cause i think you're doing a wonderful job so far.

Awe, bless your heart dear. That was sweet of you. You didn't have to do that. Kind of you however. Thank you. *bows humbly* Don't see how I am desirvant of such thanks. Thank you.

I know you'll do us all proud and your friend. You've done a marvelous job thus far. By no means could you ever disappoint. ^^ Take as much time as you need. There isn't a rush or time limit to finishing this wonderful story plot.

I pray that you the family along with your friends family are doing well. God bless you hun.

I've read this story before and loved it. I'm so sorry that the original author passed on. I had no idea. I'm glad you'll keep going with it though. It really is an interesting story and I wish you all the luck in the world.

dont worry u r doing a fabulous job lots of love

plz update soon, i'v really liked this fic.
The writing is better than most of the over fanfics i'v read so fare, have u writen any overs?
plz update as soon as posible =]

I really like this story a lot. I can't wait until the next update!

so far i love it and cant wait for an update

yay!!! for your first attempt at fan fiction i think youre doing an AMAZING job of it :]] so... i can't wait for the next chappie :]]]]

I was very sorry to hear that the original author of this story passed away!! I am sure he will be happy that you have decided to finish it for him and I know you will do a great job!! I really like this story and will be watching for the updates!!
Your Friend--
Yashalove