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for Timeless Love

by TheRealHotaru

person who_do_you_do
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"WOW" this stoy is really good. Please update soon.
person LdyMoon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there you I know you, you always left a great review on BG. Good to see you writing!!! ^__^ Welcome aboard!!!

Ok, now that I've given you proper welcome, I believe this is the first fic that I've read that mainly focuses on Shippo's love intrest!!! Yay you!!!! It has a very good beginning, you caught my attention too with the title I always have a hard time coming up with those things I don't know how real authors do it. To have everything about the story in a few words its too hard :P I'm so happy that Kagome made that wish, I was like oh no, how are they going to wait 500 years!!!! And then Shippo making that kind of promise and Inuyasha getting mad it was so like him to be overly protective of what he holds dearest.

Can't wait to read more so update soon k!

ldymoon