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I can't believe Shippo almost marked Rei. I was about to get mad at you because Shippo's supposed to be with Chiyoko. But I still feel bad for Rei.

When are you going to write more?

Uncle Sam...well Mr. America why do you need to look like a pervert, you fit right into the profile of middle aged child molestor. But, you cool peeps right???? Anyway, love the yellow back pack being given by him and...making shifty eyes here... The unrequainted love with Rei. At first I was like, ok, they can get together but than she'll have to die because Shippo is going to get with Chiyoko and the poor child will be devasted not to mention Chiyoko doesn't seem like the type to want to share? But now she can live with my blessings since she won't have the pain of a broken heart of a failed marriage. However, I always believe in the power of love, so, she needs to get with someone that is similar to Shippo in honor and loyalty.

***hint hint***

And another thing, I think I've spotted a cool plot, I don't want to spoil it for others, but, if your going that way I think it's too cute.

Good job and waiting to see an update.

ldymoon

WOW, this is crazy. Good job with the explainations. Am I to assume that the guy she later developed a crush on and saved herwas in fact shippo?

awwwww you thanked me in ur Authors note!!! that's so sweet! u are the very first. lol

So that's how she gets her back pack. This seems cute keep it up your doing a good job.

Awww its Shippo cute idea. Is Inuyasha going to let him love his daughter cuz I'm so happi that he didn't die.

I don't understand why there isn't another chapter. I was so into it. U . U There aren't many stories where Shipo is the main character so good for you. More people need to make him grow up and have a love life. I can tell that Rei loves Shippo how is this going to work. Will he eventually give in to her or break her heart. I know for me...my heart got broken when the guy I liked picked my girlfriend we both liked the same guy and he was our friend too. I kinda walked away after highschool. Chose to go to a different college. So I hope Rei gets something unlike me.

It's cute update soon

oh, i was so excited to see you writing a story that I forgot some of the other points i wanted to make.
I love the cycle thing, where he has these cycles way before he's supposed to so that he could catch up with Chiyoko. And two...Inuyasha hurt Shippo!!! I know it's necessary for the story but ow that hurt me.

Good job.

I luv the angst btween Shippo and Chiyoko? Did I spell it right andyway I luv tht she tells him all about a crush she has and it just eating him up inside just eating him up but he's trying to be supportive I luv the bus ti was halirious!!!! I love the tail I think it's so sexy does that make me a perv??? I'm a perv arent I damn it I'm a sick person @___@ ! How can I like tails on a guy!!! Maybe it's a fake detachable one yeah now I'm not so sick forgive my rambling adn arguing with oneself.

Good stroy update soon I'd like to read more

Carmen

Wow, in spite of your constant spelling errors and format issues, I really love the idea that you are playing out in this story. It is VERY good, i became genuinely enthralled. I hope that you will finish this soon and keep everyone updated.

you might want to use some spacing when different people talk... just a suggestion, it DOES make it easier to read. I love how protective Inuyasha is of his little girl. . . do they have another child? that's what i kind of gathered, just wanted to make sure.