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for Timeless Love

by TheRealHotaru

person LdyMoon
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was another good chapter, I can't wait to see Inuyasha's face when he realizes that he fought Shippo and couldn't kill him. I'm looking forward to see what he has to say to his best friend. I liked how Inuyasha told Shippo to get with Rei so that their relationship wouldn't have to change and I like how Shippo responded.

All in all this was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more.
person ldyneptune
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story enjoyed it keep good work..........go real hotaru
person who_do_you_do
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED, LOVED, LOVED CHAPTER 2!!!!! Up date soon...I need more!!!!!
person Sammie
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Id just liek to say that this story is noice. I love Inu/Kag got married and have a kid. I feel a little bit icky because Shipou is like their kid too but I understand so I root for him yes I do. Right number three fast ok.
person cassidy
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person anon
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is different so I like it.
person anon
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is very cute keep writing you do a good job. It seems that you have an imagination to carry this story. Update soon.
person i bite you back
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this and it's ok. sucks to be rei. sucks to be Shippo beecuz he's engaged to an infant and still needs to wait how many yeaers??? Then he will hve to deal with pops so yeah...it's ok but sucks for everyone
person a little yuri and yoai
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For yoru 1st story it is nice. I wish that he did do somethign with the girl. Well maybe you can make it that the girls will be yuri like do a M/F/F so that Shippo can have both of them adn noone is hurt.
person BayBeeGurl
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is good. I thought you were going to kill Shippo. I'm happy you didn't.