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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter five was a nice chapter. I can't wait to see what Chiyoko is going to say when she realizes the teacher is her bestfriend Rei. And I liked how the bells rang when Shippo realized that "oops his secret was told." I also enjoyed the confrontation between Rei and Shippo when she confessed what was really going on.
Overall it was a very good chapter. I'd say that being that this is your first fic it's moving smoothly and you should be proud.
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Overall it was a very good chapter. I'd say that being that this is your first fic it's moving smoothly and you should be proud.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't Wait for next chapter.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised to see that Yori is the mystry man. lol, I liked that shippo tricked the guy that was funny. undate soon.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha I don't know why i decided i didn't want to read this anymore.
i like this story. I think it's mean of shippo to do... but i understand completely.
though loving someone also means the ability to let go as bad as it hurts.
too bad shippo wasn't the mystery man.
i like this story. I think it's mean of shippo to do... but i understand completely.
though loving someone also means the ability to let go as bad as it hurts.
too bad shippo wasn't the mystery man.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, we all know that Chiyoko is going to be Shippo's so....it was a devious fox plan for Shippo to send away Yori to go to Disney Land with that sick little girl. Shippo is so evil. He didn't care not one red cent on the sick girl, he just wanted his competition out of the way. I thought that was funny.
Again, it was a good chapter. Well written and enjoyable. KIU.
see ya next chapter.
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Again, it was a good chapter. Well written and enjoyable. KIU.
see ya next chapter.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon its a good story.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shippo is bad he's a bad man. Using good Yori's good intentions for his own means but hes so cute with it. Good chapter looking forward to reading the next.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really like the plot so far. Updated soon.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Not as many regularly updating authors still here, so it's good to see one. Can't wait to read more update soon please.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good. I like that Inuyasha did not get mad at Shippo when he found out about the vow. Well he was a little upset, but he forgave him.