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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwe
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my favorite part about this chapter was Eien.
'you smell like daddy and mommy before they argue." that's classic
'you smell like daddy and mommy before they argue." that's classic
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just read both parts of rev. and i think you did a real good job with it. it was sexy. i'm also happy rei justs to live happily ever after with someone who loves her. can't wait to read more. anyway im off to bed now.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review on Kagome's Diary yeah I know but a dairy entry really doesn't have any mispelling it is just a thought written down if you put it my way anyways nice story by the way I added a chapter or so to Kagome's Dairy read it sometime I'll be looking foward to your reviews keep up the good work
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was really surprised at her answer when he asked what did she want. The roach was gross but kind of funny.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwe, that's cute.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet and naughty of Shippo to help Rei to move on. I have to say for the first part of this chapter why a roach? Such an ugly animal I was creeped out when I read it I was checking my doors before going to bed,.
Shippo in control can be a dangerous thing.
good job
Carmen
Shippo in control can be a dangerous thing.
good job
Carmen
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is cute are you sure you want this story on this sight maybe you'd be better off writing this story on fanfiction.net instead where is the real stuff??? I mean cmon!!! This is so waffy. I didn't even feel a flicker. It's cute but I'm not hot for Shippo or your story.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there the real hotaru thanks for your reviews I enjoyed reading them. I laughed when you said you reached the last chapter and was like "NOOOO!" I'm happy your enjoying it.
Now for your story. It was cool of Shippo to help his friend see that she needed to move on and be happy on her own. And I'm glad that Kouga didn't beat the snot out of him for making her realize the way he did. I like the fact that Kouga has someone who knows how it feels to have an unrequainted love. They should be happy together.
Now for your story. It was cool of Shippo to help his friend see that she needed to move on and be happy on her own. And I'm glad that Kouga didn't beat the snot out of him for making her realize the way he did. I like the fact that Kouga has someone who knows how it feels to have an unrequainted love. They should be happy together.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good, update soon!