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Hey, I've been following your story for a little while. Just wanted to say, Keep up the good work. I liked the way you did it so far, I aint going to lie, at first I thought I wouldn't like it but I was wrong. Anxiously awaiting when they finally are able to "be together" if you will lol.

Sorry I haven't reveiwed. There was a problem with my computer and I couldn't get online. I really enjoyed this one. I wonder what Shippo would of asked Chiyoko if Rei didn't show up when she did. The ending of this chap was also cute. Please update soon.

BooYa! Well Rei told her that she started the game of hide and seek, but, even when she told her Chiyoko could've changed something. She told her, your probably not going to tell him about this conversation. I would've said something about this conversation. Had I been Chiyoko, I guess that's why I'm not her otherwise it would be over with. Well, girl it's 2:43 I'll holla later, sorry it took so long for me to review, but, my sister came down last week and we just watched so much anime that we couldn't read straight. At least I couldn't I was seeing things that just weren't there. Long story and now I'm rambling because I'm tired and chatty. Good chapter see ya at the next one.

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It was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay, did she want to get hit by a car??? U don't stand in the middle of the road singing to a guy you like. But, than he wouldn't be her hero if he didn't save her. I was worried for a minute when Yori was in the picture, but something told me not to let him bother me so much...and now I know why. >tee hee hee<

Anyway, good chapter looking forward to reading more.

PS. You better read and review my story missy I haven't seen you in a hot minute XD

I love this. I knew that there was a hidden plot... woooohoooo!!! ugh.. i know i'm right now.

keep it up.. can't wait for more.

AAAAHHH! This story just keeps getting better! The twist with her kissing her mystry man was cool. Update soon I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I liked how InuYasha's daughter is teaching Shippo what she's learning in school. And it was so cute how he drew the picture of them holding hands. If I'm not mistaking It was her right? I can't wait for you to up date.

This one was really cute!!!

my fav part of this story is when he drew the picture and he didn't want to let her see & when she finally saw the natural blush that crossed her features and his. It's so cute. Good job! Very true to young love. Well I'm off to bed now since I have to babysit tomorrow UGH I'm going to be so tired and cranky I'll have 4 kids @ my small apartment being loud all day long but she has no one else so I can't say no. Pray for my sanity. *.*