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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story!! More please-I can't wait. This love story has been so wonderful, I keep checking for new chapters. I have to know what happens to Chiyoko and Shippo. Great set up with Hana for more. Madam, you are a gifted story teller! Keep it up.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a very intresting chapter. It's funny even though I knew what was going to happen I still hoped something would change and that some how everything would of ended happy. I guess I have to wait and see what happens next, so update soon.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My fav part in this story is Inuyasha throwing the stuff off Shippo's desk and then hitting him. LOL. And Shippo trying to take Chiyoko from her family was a shock. As always, your story is going good. update soon.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE your story, and I can't wait until you write the next one!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Shippo Was going to steal Chiyoko. I liked what Shippo told Inuyasha about being honorable for being a sly thief, but then again he is a fox!!! But I'm happy he didn't do it. It must have been really hard for him to tell inuyasha all of that. I can't wait to see what happens when Inuyahsa comes home again with his daughter.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol that's funny.
nice chap.
nice chap.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I started laughing when Shippo gave Inuyasha two weeks off and Inu was all like look if it's because I hit you and the head and threw the things off your desk... I thought that was funny I can see him like retract back and than get angry for doing that and go into his Inuyasha tirade of yelling. But, I was so sad for both of them and now...I am impatient I want to see what happens when Chiyoko comes home and he tells her to not go down the well anymore!!!!! Come On!!!!
Who am I talking too my story is 42 chapters and going! Ok, I'll let you off this time. I'll see chapter 11 next week. Good job.
Who am I talking too my story is 42 chapters and going! Ok, I'll let you off this time. I'll see chapter 11 next week. Good job.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well first I'd like to say thanks for writing a Shippo story that envolvs him with someone other than Keylala. I know I just totally fucked up her name but I want to be an ass right now. This is a cute story to say the least and...I guess keep writing.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOHHHHHSSSS this is just so...KAWAII!
ok. Good job well written and looking forward to your next chapter.
Carmen
ps. What is Inuyasha going to do now that they are both in the present????? I think I might know. XD
ok. Good job well written and looking forward to your next chapter.
Carmen
ps. What is Inuyasha going to do now that they are both in the present????? I think I might know. XD