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This isn't really taboo, incest-wise, considering that they're not really blood siblings. It's taboo only because Kagome is underage... and may I just point out that your lemons are SUPER UBER HOT! FUCK! These are the hottest lemons on the entire site... no, on the entire internet! Srsly, no joke! O_O

no!!! keep the hardcore porn!! its the best part, u may just want to add a bit more of the plot to it, u know the whole since theyre bro and sis, wat will happen? blah blah blah...etc.

FUCKING SHIT! THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE HOTTEST PIECE OF FICTION IN THE HISTORY OF FANFICTION. ARE YOU GOING TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS? I'D FUCKING LOVE TO READ MORE. PLEASE!!!!!!!

Even if they're step-siblings, they can get married once Kagome becomes legal. *hint* *hint* But please keep the sexorz coming! *grin*

P.S.

Who cares about a stupid plot when you can write hardcore lemons like this? Screw the plot! Just have them fuck like bunnies for several more chapters, give them babies (because I think Kagome'd be pregnant with the way Naraku's been fucking her) by now and then marry them off and live happily ever after. You don't need any plot when you have lemon skills like this.

wow that was great i love it .. please please please please please update soo i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Hell no don't stop, I wish I could write this stuff like you do. Fucking awesome! No pun intended. I can't wait to see what you cook up next.

Now that I think about it, you could also put some flashbacks explaining why Naraku ever feared that his "damn father" would keep him away from Kagome, or if the reason Kagome and her mother weren't geting along at the end had something to do with Naraku... did any of them suspect of Naraku's hidden intentions towards Kagome? May be right before they died they were considering sending one of the two away to keep Naraku from temptation? May be Naraku knew about that and that's why he hugged Kagome so tightly when she asked what was going to happen to her, whether she was goona be sent away or he would abandon her on her own or something? I'm very curious as to whether their parents could sense what was happening, whether they could feel the attraction between the two: acknowledged and turned aware in Naraku's case, oblivious and unconscious in Kagome's.

All of the storys are good when is the next ones coming out? I hope soon :)

Yes but the plot you add can make the lemons all the more interesting... Have one of Kagome's distant aunts or uncles come visit and they do it right there with the uncle/aunt right in the very same house... all the time knowing that if they're discovered the uncle/aunt will press charges and fight Naraku for the custody of Kagome...

You can also have some teenager boy from Kagome's school be inlove with her and get her permission to come over for a study session, but hitting on Kagome more than actual studying, making Naraku furious with jealousy and decide to have Kagome home-schooled with a 'female' tutor instead of her attending high school were lustful boys could make a pass on HIS Kagome... but then he finds out that he can't get her out of school without her aunt/uncle getting more suspicious and watching him like a hawk.

damn. there's just something sexy about fucking you're own brother/sister. not that i do it though... i've been waiting for a story kinda like this. and damn, you're one helluva writer! awesome work and waiting for the next chapter *wink*