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for The Demon's Promise

by gumdropz

schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi
i just read the story and thought it was interesting, though there is one problem..lol, i kinda got sick of dragging the bars to the left and right side just so i could read the other sentences...
could you possibly write them in an A4 size document? This would make it easier not only for all readers but also for yourself that way you know what you're going to write before forgetting them...not implying that you do forget it.

can't wait for the next one :D maybe you should add like a little audience for the little Kagome and the sex crazed Naraku :D
person Anoxiaperson
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*touches self*

T3T Ive never reacted in such a way to a fic.

Good job, please continue!
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That was amazing! i never thought something involving Naraku and Kagome could be so stimulating. It would be interesting to read about their interactions towards eachother when Kagome has to go back to school, and if there are any boys interested in her and what Naraku would do about that.

She is only fifteen and is probably getting better sex than other people either her age or older. (that is kind of sad, but for Kagome its a good thing)

Great fic. I do hope that you update soon, that i do!
person Lady Kio-tye
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! O.o
person eva
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg this is amazing. please update agian soon
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Yashie
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i had to copy and past the story to Microsoft word in order to read it. but so far it rocks!



Signed, Yashie!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so damn good.please....UPDATE!
person Youkerie
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice fic- nah just the sex is fine- :3 but i dont think anyone would mind some other stuffs for a lil- please update!
person Trouble
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was Awsome