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okay

Shippou is a fox youkai (not a fox hanyou as you wrote in your story). Inuyasha is a hanyou (half-youkai). You have mixed that up in your story.

Inuyasha's jacket is not called a "komodo". It is a 'haori' or just call it a jacket if you don't know the Japanese word.

The only 'Komodo' I found in the Japanese dictionary is the "Komodo Dragon" which is a large reptile.

oh, i am most confused.... lol. a good sex scene indeed, i have to say, but wasn't this supposed to be a yaoi story? While i'm not entirly gay (bi) and enjoy a good streight sex scene, what about the yaoi??? lol. from a literary POV though, this story is comming along nicely and looks promising. But i am submitting an official request for inuyasha xshippo sex! lol

I really look forward to reading the next cchapter (and all that is to come) of this story. you are absolutly right thatthere arent enough shippoXInu pairings in this world. :) i actually have a shippo/inuyasha pairing lemon fic, but i havent typed it yet... Anyway, pleas do hurry with chapter 4, this looks like it will be a most interesting story. :)

oh and, just so you know, inuyasha's fire-rat, i think, it technically part of a type of kimono, although i might be wrong, it's just that ive never heard od a kimodo... if i am wrong about this, i would love tto be corrected so if you wish, drop me a line on my posted story, or at my e-mail address.

Can't wait for chapter 4!

oo it worked this itme, i was a little dismayed that a link to my userpage didn't pop up when i reviewed your sotry the first time... anyway, this on eshould work. AFF's wierd sign in deals are confusing... >.<

I can't wait for the next chapter. Shippo is just so cute.

Why does everyone (well 70% probrobly) make shippo gay!!! (sigh) but i'll have to read this story because its has shippo.