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for Summer Heat

by Ceridwyn

person Kero
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! You weren’t kidding when you said that they were out of character. Sesshoumaru is so un-believably out of character I was laughing. But, to speak quite candidly, him being out of character doesn’t affect this particular story.

Great new chapter I can’t wait to see what happens next. *Snickers* I think I know what Sesshoumaru is going to buy in the jewelry store. Oh My God I think I would have died if my mother said she would go and buy condoms for me.

That was hilarious, I think I died laughing.

You have such a talent and I can’t wait to see what happens. I absolutely love this story and your other one as well. Please update soon, and thanks for the info of how they met. To bad it wasn’t longer though, that would have been awesome.

Oh well thanks again for the great chapter.

Good luck in finding a job

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person Noacat
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that you decided to continue with this story. I like that you gave some background info as well. Good luck with the job hunting. I know how crappy that is! Well, till we meet again.
person lala_land
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh i love it please keep going!!!!
person Kekee
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this is really good and i definatly think you shoukd write more cause that wasn't possibly enough of that story and i for one think that it would make a better story than a one-shot.....^_^ (this is in my opinion)
person blbllb
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please more chapters
person little lime
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please you have to create more chapters this is sucha great story. i want to see how they met and stuff like how they became and there backgrounds. great oneshot please write more chapters
person fluffly sess
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please more chapters, this is a great one-shot and I hope you continue to write. I love your other story the roses and thorns one that is a great one as well.
person dingdong
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA KAGGYS? Lol that is a funny nickname. please make more chapters you are an amazing writter and i can't wait to see what else you come up with.
person Fallen-Angel's-Love
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! There must be more! This is sooo awesome!!