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for When Love Awaits

by forgottentennyo

person angel
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man jaken you are going to get it when sess finds out ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person yoshiko
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really really good. keep going. :)
person Midnight Star
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is starting to get interesting. Sess is going to be majorly po'd. Still crossing my fingers and hoping they get together. I'll have to wait and find out how he rescues Rin.
person Sorceress
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What!!! They can't do that, Rin is Sesshoumaru's and he wont let them keep her.
person animegirl007
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooo!!!!!!! that was good....I can't wait until Sesshomaru comes for Rin!!!!!!!!!
person Lala
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story :) keep it up!
person Sam
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO NO you are doing fine.. really you are. Sesshomaru likes her but is denieing it... big shocker there. ummm.. Rin knows she likes him but is just pushing her feelings back because she knows that he cant return the feelings.. O and I bet that when she wears the kimono it will be white..
person Sam
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I find it more than funny.. that out little fluffy was chasing butterflys. :) I can see Inuyasha doing it because he was just such a litte cutie when he was younger but trying to imagine a sturn little sesshomaru is hard.
person angel
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm does rin have deeper feeling for sess.. please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, your story has certainly caught my interest. It has a very interesting start, and Sesshomaru getting jealous is always fun. I also like the fact that he's not "all cold and evil and I don't care about anything" sesshomaru like in most other stories I've read. There are a few mistakes here and there, typos and minor things, but what story doesn't have them? Just letting you know.

Can't wait to see what comes of it! I'll definitely keep my eye out for updates.