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Oh this was GREAT! Keep up the good work! I had to start from the beginning but glad i spent the time on it!

I read your other fic and it was awesome. The ending with Koga and Inuyasha was funny. And you can always add a lemon next chapter. Awesome please update soon!

Yay!!! I did a little happy dance before reading this awesome chapter. This is like my all time FAVORITE story. Every week I check for an update. Still LOVE this story and I will be checking your naruto story for sure. Please update again soon!!

Wow, I'm amazed. Please keep writing beacuse I LOVE this story. It makes me smile. Great job!

YAY ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!! As I hope you can see I LOVE this fic. Like every week I would check to see if there was an update and YAY there's an update! Love this chapter can't wait to read the next one! Please update soon!

Yay another great chapter!! I'm always checking for updates on this story. It was awesome I loved it keep up the good work!!

Yay!!! Another awesome chapter. Fighting, sex, and ramen, its all good!

That story was so darn good it isn't funny. Go me, I'm married to Inuyasha *sings happly*. Ok Only thing I did't like was what he did to my poor back side. But your the writer so i guess I'll have to live with it. I just hope I can sit down tomarrow.

I really like your story....but you really need to focus on a few things. First, If your piece is first person, you really need to keep if in first person. You seem to keep switching it back and forth between narrative to first person. Second, you really should explain how Inuyasha and the reader met. I see the demons and morals co-existed in your piece...you should really explain that to the reader before hand. Set up your story more...make your characters really come to life....Why is the reader scaried that Inuyasha will leave her for another woman??? What role does Kagome in Inuyasha life??? Why did she want to see Inuyasha again??? Your story is missing so much information.....

Please do not take my critique of your story as a flame....I AM NOT FLAMING YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I really like your story..I just it needs to be improved more, so you can have a real winner on your hands.....