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for Kagome's Sorrow

by DecadenceRefined

schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh.... hm.
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwe he loved her and pretended that Kikyo was Kagome...

wow, a cool chapter would be a dream inu or something
telling her that it;s okay to move on... apologizing for leaving...
for everything.

^_^

she is a miko afterall, she has the power to do all that.. .

to communicate.
person tru
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I thought a mate or an orphan i never dreamed Inuyasha's son. Wow. I love this story so much will kagome go back I just can't see her taking Inukiba from Shippo she knows what it's like without a father and who would help him with his demon side. Anyway really love this story because Inu never grows up but Kagome does and I think that kag and a grown up Shippo make a couple that could reallyu work. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW!!!This is such a special story! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more! Michi
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... I dk about this story... i'm not into kag/shippo pairings....

it's kind of creepy.
lol

nicely done though.
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh fucking hell please don't make this a Kagome shippo story...

please don't kill inuyasha off, or have him with kikyo...
they should be together..

i'm enthralled but you have errors.
migght wanna fix them.

and add more.
person Coffee Gyrl (NSI)
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm this is an interesting piece. I really look forward to the rest of the story.
person bluemoon_175
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you got me bouncing off the walls to read more, so I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.
person Sentinel
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave us hanging like this! Please continue!

(I get the feeling you were inspired by a similar short story I've read elsewhere on the 'net...but there's nothing wrong with that. Looking forward to reading more; you have a good writing style and solid storytelling.)
person Cloudy
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON!!

As it was soo good!!