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for Kagome's Sorrow

by DecadenceRefined

schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah umm... I think I don't like the idea of inu being gone... it's too sad.
person Dyquem
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This Kagome has "emotional issues." What a selfish woman. Not only did she ruin her own life by fixating on her teenage years, but she expected her friends in the feudal era to build a proverbial shrine and then bury themselves in it. Inuyasha waited for her and grieved for a year. She should have been understanding of his attempts to move on with his life, and not get so hysterical she damns everyone, especially her old friends.
person Dyquem
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to tell you. I have no problem with Kagome/shippo pairings, and it would be SO LIKE Shippo to take in the orphaned Inukiba. I note he is named after a combo of inuyasha and kikyo, not kagome.
person Shanalir
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen a story with such an agsty beginning that managed to captivate me like this one has. I can't wait to see where you go with it!
person Tori~Chan
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this ^_^ it's intersting and i just love SHippo/Kagome stories....you can never find them hardily but not that many people make them and thank you ^_^ you have an intersting writting style and i like the direction your goinf with this story. good luck with your writting and onegai update soon! ^^
person ShadowandFlamePanther
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great update. I am so glad that Shippou kissed her, too bad for that darn rib. Great story and can't wait for more. Please update soon.

I haven't seen too many Kagome/Shippou stories and I am really loving this one.
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story! It's definently taking some unexpected turns... Can't wait to see where you continue to go with it. Keep up the good work! ^.~ FoxyLilVixen aka MichiruAOZ
person khghjiy
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story please write more soon.
person The Black Miroku
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!
SHE HAS TO HUNT FOR THE SHIKON NO TAMA AGAIN?
THAT SUCKS ASS But little Inukiba sounds so cute.
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOW COULD YOU?????? NOOOOO CLIFFFFFIIIIIIEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSss


Please please please update soon, omg I have got sit on pins and needles waiting for an update. I shall check each day. Please hurry.

Great Story perfect score.