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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start!
I am curious where this story is going, so far you've left it quite unclear ^_^
The best part is, your storytelling is great! Much more organized and in order than I often see.
Can't wait to see more!
I am curious where this story is going, so far you've left it quite unclear ^_^
The best part is, your storytelling is great! Much more organized and in order than I often see.
Can't wait to see more!
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very insightsive story. intresting but not boring at all. keep up the good work. update soon!-Joanna
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style and your story is intresting. Thumbs up 2 u!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is thrilling, truly wonderful! I will be checking numerous times a day for updates I'm positive. I just wanted to say that your writing style is beautiful and refreshing, especially after all the time I've spent sifting through the terrible InuYasha fanfictions that have piled up and begun rotting. So far, up there with the best styles I've seen. I just love it when it's canon or as close as one can get. You obviously know what your about so look I forward to more!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far. You've captured my attention, that's
certain. Please update soon.
certain. Please update soon.