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I really liked how you portrayed inuyasha in the last scene there, his brief meeting with Sesshoumaru was my favorite part of the chapter.

names? I've always liked the sound of Minoru :-)

ahh a cliffy!.. ugg i sooo want to know what sess says to inu.. grr! how could you?

... i guess that means you'll update soon....plllease?

wow
Sesshoumaru's going to know everything now. Anyway, great story and it's developing very well. I'm really sorry to point this out but there's one inconsistancy. In this chapter, Kagome said she had "given her virginity to him." But in one of your earlier chapters she said, or at least implied, that she had sex before, just not for a long time. Other than that, I love what happening so far and can't wait to read the next chapter.

*jaw drops to the floor* Wow! Did someone not wake up on the right side of the bed that morning?

I am very happy that Kagome has decided to fight. I am also happy that she has regained her memories of the past. Now what is going to happen? Sesshy has to find out sooner or later about the pup/child.

Now about baby names, hmm ... How about Phoenix (hee hee), as in the child will rise from the ashes to become a flame. Or Flame, Brooke, River, Rain. Just a few suggestions.

PS, thanks for the plug. I am tickled that you like my story.

Until we meet again.

WHAT?? INUYASHA IS ALIVE?! THAT SON OF A BITCH IS ALIVE AND HE DIDN'T EVEN TRY TO LOOK FOR KAGOME?! I don't care if he doesn't love her like a lover, she's still one of his best friends, why in hell didn't he try to contact her? The asshole!

*breath in* breath out* breath in* breath out*

Okay, I'm calm now...

Baby Boy's names? How about "Shiro" or "Shiroi" (they mean white, or light, I think) or "Sunichi"? Perhaps "Shido" or "Shugo"? Or "Kusanagi" (it's the name of one of the Three Imperial Regalia or Three Legendary Divine Objects in Japan: the jewel, the mirror and the sword named Kusanagi... I can see Sesshoumaru's son having the name of the a legendary mighty sword in japanese mythology).

Yeah. "Kusanagi" can also work as either a boy or a girl's name. The myth of the Kusanagi sword is as famous in Japan as the myth of the Excalibur sword, King Arthur's sword is in Bretain. Besides, KU-SA-NA-GI has four syllables, just like SES-SHOU-MAR-RU, I-NU-YA-SHA and their father I-NU-TAI-SHO, so it would kinda follow the tradition if the baby were to have that name.

good more more more

That was a great Trick, i laughed at least. Keep going keep going all i gotta say

Don't even threaten with something like that. That was just mean. I'm not trying to flame ya, but damn, why did you do that? I wonder how long it's going to take him to figure out that she's in the hospital and that he's the only one that can really get her to fight for life? And besides, he REALLY needs to figure out how to control his desire, lust, whatever you want to call this hunger of his. I mean it's good that he had the mind to feel bad about it but he didn't have to keep going. I so knew that she was going to get pregnant. But anyway, I have come to request that you continue this amazing twist of fate that leaves this guy far less intelligent than he was in the show. I like that. I find it a little strange that he didn't recognize her scent sooner. And shouldn't the boss know like everything about his employees, no matter how many there are. I mean, it's the mighty Sesshomaru, knower of wverything. Meaning that he would hav enoticed her name among the list of people on his payroll list. I don't know.
But you said that reviews are required to urge you on in the continuation of your masterpiece and you can be assured that with every new chapter that I read you shall recieve another review from me. No matter how annoyed you become with them. Unless you send me an email to discourage me, then I'll stop. Here I ramble and carry on, keeping you from writing. Sorry. I'll stop doing that too. Back to my point; Please continue writing and not stop until the story is complete. Not the 'I'm sick of this story and so I'll stop'. No, it has to be complete with an ending good enough to be from you. If the story is any judge than it will end up with a strange, intriguing twist that will leave us(readers) begging for a sequal.
I may end up loosing the internet in a little bit, so you may want to keep going if you want a to keep this follower.

So your favorite Inuyasha character coupling is Sesshomaru/Kagome right. Whould it be unfair to ask that you write other stories as well? I mean after you've finished this one, of course. Why did you stop writing in The Photograph? I got that picture that was done for it and it is also great, doesn't really compare with the story, but it's good. I left a couple reviews there too.
Thank you for reading and please obey my request. (OMG that didn't sound right but I didn't really know what to say. Yeah, um... good bye.

you're so evil but i love your story, someone needs some spanking!