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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person Tenshi Youkai
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You finally updated!!! I am so Happy!!!!! OK So... I really like the way you have handled this fic. It keeps popping into my head at the most inconvienent times. Especially the scene in the club where Kagome is dancing with Sesshoumaru in bliss and her friends are conspiring to get her away from him. and that scene in the park, and that scene -- well ok-- so I really like the whole thing. It was very hot!

I really hope that you plan the happy ending for the couple. being a Single mother is a LOT harder that it looks.

I really like the way you had Kagome-Miko talk to Kagome-herself. I enjoyed the fact that you made her tell herself to remember.

I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. I do hope that we may have a little sex in it, even if it is just a fantasy of somebodies.

Oh, and by the way, you are more than old enough to be spanked in punishment(and reward). And Don't worry, if the spanking was promised to you, you will enjoy it!!! ;) trust me on this one, okay.

Tenshi Youkai
person Tussi
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!!
person Liquorish
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't take so long to update! Your story is really good!
person StarletAngel
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! Your prank was hilarious, btw! Keep up the wonderful writing!
person Sweetcakes
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still 13 years older than you young'un spankins are soo possible, especially when you reminde me of my kids! And, you don't like your cookies taken away hummm? It's the cookies or the cheesecake take your pick, buy you can't have both! Personally, I say to hell with the cookies, someones gonna get a but kickin for touching the cheesecakes.

Ok, on with the review.

Finally!! Inuyasha makes his appearance in the story, I can't wait for Sesshy to get a huge dose of guilt for being STUPID!!! Looks like I'm going to have to re-read the story over again...again. I thought that Kagome had already been "deflowered" before Sesshy's involvement. Oh well.

You know, your doing really well, you still make spelling mistakes. Let me know if you want someone to review your chapters for spelling errors. I'd be more than happy to volunteer.

Have a Happy Holidays Vague!
person madmiko
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Loved getting to read another chapter! Now I'm wondering if only a few powerful youkai remember, does that mean Inuyasha does not? And ew! He's married? Kikyou? Does he not remember Kagome? Because he would have known what time period she lived in. Can't wait to find out in Sess and Inu's conversation. Can't wait for Sess to find out Kagome almost died. I really like the way you had her save herself instead of him doing it. Baby boy name: I have to recommend Raiden - thunder god. Wasn't their first time together during a thunderstorm? Just a thought! I sure hope you get a chance to write more soon!!
person desra34
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR FANFIC!!! For the baby name, if it's a boy, I think you should name him HADEN or HADRIAN. Those names seem more fitting for the name of Kagome's son. I hope I influenced you. Thanks.
person Dawna Sama
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about for a girl Casta-Lynn, and ashitaka for the boy? just throwing out some names
person binab86
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why not have a boy and a girl, that way you wont have to choose, like can look human with youkai abilities while the other looks youkai with miko abilities. that would be cool, for the names thats pretty difficult, but hopefully my review helped. thanxs for updating i cant wait to know what happened to the other people and how they think of kagome, does shippo still think of kagome as his mom and does inuyasha still like kag. And who is inuyasha's wife. Oh man i cant forget about kouga and sango, miroku. rin? Please let me know what is up. i really like the twin i dea but its up to u.
person Snowfall
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated! Alright, Kagome and the baby live! And her family accepts her. Ooooh, is Sesshoumaru going to find out that Kagome had been brainwashed to not remember? Will he believe Inuyasha that there was no big plan? I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!

Heheh. You answered a question for me. I wondered if capital 'I's would mess up the italics html. *giggles* Now I know that it does! Glad it was you that discovered it and not me. LOL I have enough problems as it is! Can I make fun of you now? LOL ^_^

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