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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person Darkside the Fallen Angel
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*starts throwing rocks at you*
person AIdeen
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh so he knows now!! SO good!! Can't wai to see what happens next!!! I love this story soo much!!! One of my favs here!!!
person lala_land
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh my god if you dont write I will kill you keep it uo!!!!!
person Rudehero
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girl, you have so much review that you don’t need one from me, but it’s Christmas eve, and this chapter is simply amazing that I can’t resist. I had to drop a line.

Okay many lines— ‘I think I had too much alcohol-free eggnog ^-^’

Anyways, happy holiday, and have a wonderful new year!
person Sweetcakes
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another wonderful chapter to an awsome story. And I mean awsome, I check, this site many, many, many times a day looking for updates from my favoite authors. (Pheonix is one of them).

I thought moving Kagome to England was an awsome idea, everyone else moves her to America. You were very original, and I like it. Heck the whole story is original, that's why I think you should clean up the spelling, I've said it before, and I'll say it again. YOU COULD WIN AWARDS WITH THIS STORY!!!

I'm curious about what Seshy's been doing in the time that Kagome's been gone. Did they never meet again after the episode in his office? Did she stay in Japan for a little while before moving to England? Will it be explained in the next installment? Have I asked enough questions yet?

As for the spanking...I'm a mom. Discipline is what I do, just ask my husband, 3 kids, 3 cats and 4 dogs. Sooooo....*SPANK*
:-P....^_^ (I couldn't help myself...you remind me of my youngest daughter.)

And I'll give you your cookies back...we just baked fresh chocolate chip cookies!!

Have a wonderful Holidays!!!

person madmiko
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, as always! You covered a lot of stuff. Loved the reunion with Inuyasha. Of course he had to call Sess -- she should have known he would. The kids are cool -- especially the little man. Can't wait to see the big talk between Sess and Kagome! I'm surprised he didn't try to find her back then. Looking forward to the next chapter, as always!
person Snowfall
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you leave it there!? I...I...I can't believe that you left such a cliffy! Oh, I just loved Inuyasha's sit. LOL That was great! So, Sesshoumaru changed did he? Can't wait to see how. The past has caught up to Kagome's perfect little world. I can see her fear for her children of telling Sesshoumaru and don't blame her. It's just sad that he didn't know. I don't know if Sesshoumaru should have learned about the children until after Kagome had a chance to meet him and to see if he was a threat. Baka, Inuyasha!

The children are so sweet and I like the names. Yes, I can see how twins would be protective of each other. And when Sesshoumaru told the boy to always protect the weak, I got a bit of a hint of how he might have changed. I'm going to go back and read it again now. *snicker*

Snow
person Sara
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil, a cliffy again! (tear,sniff) hehe Keep up the great story. Merry Christmas
person lala_land
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh update again !!!!!
person Xiommy A.K.A Xiomara
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do not want to insult... But when I firts started to read your Fan-fic, I thought that you were a deprived attention hungry author. But now I see that you are not and that you did well in asking for the reader's opinion. I feel slightly jelouse that people that you have met through their reviews are now your friends and have formed a "Spank Vague" Fan club... (which I would gladly be a part of *heehee* ) I am glad that you are writing this story and have giving us pleasure from it (not in that way pervs XD! lol). So I can't wait for the next chapter... which I might add has to have a lil' bit of action between Sess and Kagome.
Oh and in another note I congratulate your mother for what she endured as a single mother, and you to your success so far. Keep it up

And for the questions... Yes my real name is Xiomara... I know strange huh? ^--^