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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person Metis
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost wish he didn't find her right away. You mentioned Preg and it would drive him even crazier to know that she was carrying his pup....er, could you refer to him as a male instead of a 'man'? I like correct terminology. *sheepish look and shrug* Thanks for the story! Don't be a stranger! heh
person lost child
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn this story is really good. I can't wait to read more of it.
person mel
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I'm really intrigued. Please continue.
person Tori
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,I'm so happy you updated so quickly. I really love this story; it's so sinful and darkly erotic. I want more...
person Cochrann
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I loved that last scene with Sesshoumaru and his inner youkai, it was really well done!
person Dawna Sama
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
again, another great chapter! keep comming with the chapters and I will keep reviewing!

Dawna Sama
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was so awesome
person wynter89
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inu Yasha is alive, baka. I wonder why he hasnt found Kagome yet, maybe he has an other woman. He cant use the excuse that he could didnt know where she lives. i mean he is a business person, he could find out that way or go to the shrine. cant be too hard to find it.

Sesshomaru on the other hand is going to get the shocker of his life if and when he finds out that who he disires is Kagome, "Inu Yasha's wench" lol I love this fic. it is extrememly beyound what i expected.

good luck
i hope you update soon...

I cant wait to find out what happens next
person judzea
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm smiling to myself because this is pure torture. I love your story, you are a good writer and you have kept my attention thus far. I can hardly wait for your next installment, that's why it's pure torture...I'm groaning now. I want more...more...faster...faster updates. Just sitting here smiling to myself wishing I had more to read. I have a question about the time period that you have your story set in... are humans and demons living together openly a commonality? It seems to me that people are not surprised by Sess's changing appearance.

Keep up the good work. You're doing a great job...really.

person wynter89
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He is sooo full of him self... but i guess he has reason to be eh... i just watched the third movie so Sesshomarus image is strongely ingrained into my mind. *drool*
good luck
i hope you write more