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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person Tori
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! As far as interest in your story goes, believe me when I say you've got it. The farther this goes the more I'm in love with it and the more impatient I am for you to continue. Fantastic job.
person emackenz
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very very sexy smut, love it!!! Sorry for the lack of constructive criticism here. Thanks much
person Xaikga
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good, I look foward to the next chapter. Very well detailed and wording.. ^^
person Wayfarer
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o_o I never knew you were this good at writing. Well-written, indeed. Keep up the good work. :D
person AIdeen
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! I love this story!!! Please up-date again soon!!! I have to know what happens next!!!
person Sagura-hime
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story, very descriptive. Keep up the good work.
person MaryEllen
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written, erotic and entertaining. Please continue story.
person Silverwolf
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Written as of Chapter 3*

Very nice! I enjoyed this chapter for some reason, though I can't quite put my finger on the reason why...

Good work! Hoping to see an update soon!
person lil_merc_girl
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! you write the best kag and sesh stories i think i've ever read. this is way way hot and i beg of you to continue writing this!!!
person kito
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOW...that was....shit....I think I need a good damn freezing shower!!!!!
And you better have to update...!!!!!!! SOON!!!
Or I'm going to hunt you down!! GRR!!