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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay...let's try that again. I think I hit the wrong key last time. Darn it!! Anywho.
You did't dissapoint Missy! I'm happy with the way it ended. I didn't see any loose ends or rushed explainations. I LOVE IT!! I do have one request...finish Photograph?
*****If any one reads the review for this...I encourage you to read Vauge's other story Photograph! It has extrodinary potential and could EASILY be another AWSOME story like Eyes of a Hunter! Trust me, you'll love that one too!*****
I'm going to be following your stories, so don't be surprised to see my name pop up in future reviews, Your writting is excellent. You're ability to suck the reader into the character's surroundings is astounding. I could envision the woods in the park, Sessy's office, the cafe in England, and Sesshy's kitchen. My only thing is the ever present spelling issues, and using the right word but with the "other" spelling (ie; right=write, here=hear).
You finished your first Fan Fic (dancing around doing the happy dance), now it's time to finish the other ones. You've got a gift that has lead(sp) to a loyal fan base.
Oh...and I'll try to lay off the spankings in the future, but still reserve the right to be President of the Spank Vauge Fan Club. ^_^
Hope to see more awsome works in the future Vauge-sama.
Your loyal follower,
Sweetcakes
You did't dissapoint Missy! I'm happy with the way it ended. I didn't see any loose ends or rushed explainations. I LOVE IT!! I do have one request...finish Photograph?
*****If any one reads the review for this...I encourage you to read Vauge's other story Photograph! It has extrodinary potential and could EASILY be another AWSOME story like Eyes of a Hunter! Trust me, you'll love that one too!*****
I'm going to be following your stories, so don't be surprised to see my name pop up in future reviews, Your writting is excellent. You're ability to suck the reader into the character's surroundings is astounding. I could envision the woods in the park, Sessy's office, the cafe in England, and Sesshy's kitchen. My only thing is the ever present spelling issues, and using the right word but with the "other" spelling (ie; right=write, here=hear).
You finished your first Fan Fic (dancing around doing the happy dance), now it's time to finish the other ones. You've got a gift that has lead(sp) to a loyal fan base.
Oh...and I'll try to lay off the spankings in the future, but still reserve the right to be President of the Spank Vauge Fan Club. ^_^
Hope to see more awsome works in the future Vauge-sama.
Your loyal follower,
Sweetcakes
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for a real good story and i love the end of the storyand i hope that youhave a good new year and be wait for next story.for you.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see this story go, so keep up the good work. I wish you would think about doing a sequel I know a lot of people would like that. But wo what you want I just can't wait to read more of your stories.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heehehe... It's me again!! LOL ^_^ How are you? I am static that I am in one of your chapters... Even if is only to reply to me. You made me happy, and like I said it is good that you espect critisism is good and will encourage you to entertain me XD! hehee... And about me being a lil' late... :( I felt a lil' jealeous, but I feel better now :) I am early with this story... And if you really wanna talk I believe that there is my hotmail... But just incase: blue_rican01@hotmail.com yup there we can chat and stuff... I also believe that we could become great friends ^_^! Well let me leave a lil' space for other reviewers... XD! And thank you, my name is strange in a way... But I'm glad you like it. just incase you are wondering how to pronounce it is: C-O-ma-rha... Xiomara ^_^...
And come on chop, chop get on with the chappies!!!
And come on chop, chop get on with the chappies!!!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am very fond of you story, but sad its over, and yet happy that you are starting a new one...
Ok, I wasn't sure if this was going to be a great story, but after readying that heated chapter, I found it IS going to be a great story and cant wait till you start it!
Also, is it going to be called Innocence lost? since thats what its first chapter is...?
And Kag's could nickname Sesshy Fluffy, instead of puppy...
and like, she could like, after takeing in some of his blood, get demon streangth and indurance, and life spane, but not turn into a demon....that would be soo cool and different!
Please, e-mail me when you continue this chapter seperatly...and tell me when you start it....please?
TTYL;
megan
Ok, I wasn't sure if this was going to be a great story, but after readying that heated chapter, I found it IS going to be a great story and cant wait till you start it!
Also, is it going to be called Innocence lost? since thats what its first chapter is...?
And Kag's could nickname Sesshy Fluffy, instead of puppy...
and like, she could like, after takeing in some of his blood, get demon streangth and indurance, and life spane, but not turn into a demon....that would be soo cool and different!
Please, e-mail me when you continue this chapter seperatly...and tell me when you start it....please?
TTYL;
megan
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the names you chose for them. Not sure what they mean, but they seem to suit them. I'm so glad you updated, I missed this story!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love your story. It's the best I've read in a while! I had started reading the story a long time ago but my internet cut out so i lost it. When I found it I was estatic. Keep the good work comming. :D
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter. I love it.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
xD First time I reviewing your story (please excuse, it's also the first time I'm reading your story) and I wanted to tell you what an awesome job you're doing, but you left it at such a cliff hanger that I want to punch you in the face. ">>
Seriously though, this story is amazing. Keep on writing!!
Seriously though, this story is amazing. Keep on writing!!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YEAH!! Its getting good now!!