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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person kinkyneko33
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story!! i love it, wonder what's gonna happen next. update soon!
person szaugglaughs
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea, liked the story! mmmm, smut, heh. So, one neg - the act of walking back and forth repetitively? I noticed that in more than one chapter it was written as 'paste' rather than 'pace,' which I assume is the word you wanted? But, liked the smut, I enjoyed the scenes in the office where they are both freaky obsessed, especially Sessh, just because of the one thought only focus of the thing, heh. Dance scene, woo. Wasn't expecting that exactly, but enjoyed it.

looking forward to their first meeting!
person Cochrann
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is headed!
person Dionysos
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i love this fic!!! they are going to meet at last!!! this was soooo hot (the lemons) i loved them i'm supposed to be writing my essay that is due tommorw but i could't stop reading ur fic!!!!!!!!great stuff please up date soon!! i can't wait to see his reaction to finding out who exactly Kagome is!
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH HOT DAMN!! To be in Kagome's shoes! *fans self with hand*

You are one hell of a talented writer! I could practically picture the darkened room, music pounding, Sesshomaru coming up to Kagome to "dance" ... *starts fanning self again* I think it is time for me to go.

Keep up the excellent work! I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Until we meet again.
person dream_queen
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* OMFG! Lol..he took her panties omg..I mean his 'memento'..XD. That was unexpected.
person AIdeen
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so much!!! Please, please, please up-date soon!!!
person Snowfall
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how long it has been since I reviewed! Ooooh, Sesshoumaru would actually track her down and now he believes that her scent is familiar. He's also becoming quite addicted to his little forays with this woman. I can see the dark clouds on the horizon. How will they react when they encounter each other in a less suitable environment? Will he be able to contain himself or will he drag her off to a corner and fuck her brains out? Oooh, on the desk, in a chair, up against the wall...Heheh, I'm such a hentai. It's all your fault though.

I really do love this fic. An apt title too. I do hope that the hunt continues in some form or fashion even if they do get together. I beg of you not to kill off either of them. It would just be so mean.

Sorry that I missed the update. So many were updated at once and certain ones seem to stay at the top of the list so, I missed it. Well, I'm anxious to read the next chapter. Well written!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Sweetcakes
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit confused about the events between the Feudal Era and the present time line of for the story. You only talked briefly about Kagome's thoughts but didn't explain how she eneded up working at Sesh's company. And what's the story behind Sesh and Inuyasha? What have they been up to besides building buisnesses? How did Kagome begin work at Sesh's company without him knowing? Don't get me wrong...I love this story! Please keep the chapters coming.
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a truely amazing writer!! Doesn't matter about it being mostly smut with a little plot thrown in! That just makes it all the more interesting!

I can't wait to read about their "meeting". It will be a very interesting encounter to say the least.

Please update as soon as you can. I will be looking for your update!

Until we meet again.