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NEED MORE!!!! lol, this story is awsome! i love how you write it and everything! i will definatly be waiting for later chappys. Good luck and have fun!

Wow! I thought that the chapters couldn't get any steamier, but boy was I wrong. Now I'm left wondering if they'll meet at his office or if it will be postponed again. Either way this story is going good. Keep updating.

Oh my gosh soooo good!! I loved this chapter!! Please up-date soon again!! I have to knwo what happens next!!

Wow! You certainly have a way of painting a sceen! I could almost hear the music pumpin' as I was reading this story. I can't wait to experience the next chapter of this wildly erotic story!!

love it, love it, love it, so update already.

That was very hot. I'm a bit surprised that Sesshoumaru in hunter mode actually let her off the hook. It was neat that you brought Shiori in.

I saw where you said that you had rushed the chapter. It does show and I would be willing to wait in order to have the better quality of your previous chapters. There were quite a few errors and repitition. I'm just being honest, okay? Don't take it personally because under normal circumstances, you do an incredible job. You may want to spruce it up if you want it to match the quality of your other chapters. Just a thought. I had to do a major revamp of a chapter a couple of years ago. It's more work, but not a big deal to repost a chapter. If you make a note in the next chapter that you reposted it, a lot of fans will go back and reread it. I often wait for several months for chapters on good fics. It's not a problem. You have an excellent fic and readers can, and will, wait for you. Eh, I will! ^_^

I shall patiently await your next chapter!

Snow

i just thought of something while reading this chapter again, isn't one of kagome's friends sesshomaru's secratary? she jsut saw him that day? didn't she recognize her boss at the club?

I so love this story! Please update soon.

ahhh this is really a great story, you keep making me want to read, to find out what they are going to do next...i really hope you update soon!..and fast.... i wonder if they will realize who eachother are...you have so many possibilities with this story, its killing me..!!!! PLEASE update soon!!!please..ca!

Ok you are such a tease, I was excited when she was to have the first fateful meeting, and then you cancelled it, but you redeamed and have a new meeting that has readers more captivated, more excited, your story is evil, in a good way. There is not one boring moment. Very well writen, it flose nicely. Cant wait till the next chapter. ttfn lol