rate_review Reviews

YIPPI AND UPDATE

oh my god , please update soon i really cant wait till they meet. i love this story

NEVER DOUBT YOUR WRITING!! I love how you put soo much detail in only a few sentences! You are gifted and have one HELL of a talent for writing!

And if that doesn't convince you, you should always remember; you are writing for yourself FIRST, and us second. I love and appreciate the fact that you are posting your story here. Please continue to write and post as I will greatly miss your story if you don't.

Until we meet again.

Oh my god you are so evil leaving it on a cliffie! Seriously though, excellent story line!
I love the plot and can't wait to read the first words out of their mouths!

PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!

Also do you have a pre-alert email that you send? If so please add me to it! Thanks!

Wow, this is another great chapt. ... the damn suspence is killing me to find out what will happen next....gah!
plz plz update soon.

lovely. Very sad for kagome, but cool. I look forward to the next chapter. I'm sure you'll do a great job. Don't worry...take your time, we'll wait! I think the chapters that can end up being the best in the end often seem the most intimidating and difficult to write, you know? Because you just have the knowledge of how cool the chapter could be, and that can be difficult to live up to your own vision, yes? I have faith! Kick that next chapter's butt!

Excellent chappie! I can't wait for the next update!

Holy shit, girl! You left us at such a cliffie! It was really nice to see some history/background. OMG! Sesshoumaru is in a rage. Is there more to it than just finding out that it is Kagome? Will Kagome know that it was Sesshoumaru that she had been cavorting around with in the park? I sure hope that she can call up her miko powers, or at least stand up to him. She was no coward all those years ago. Why should she be now?

Yeah, I know about those exhausted nights of writing. I would work days, go to school nights, then come home and write. As I became more and more tired, I hadn't realized that I was actually sick with a tumor. Even after I found out and months later after the surgery, I continued to write, but my writing was very dry. At least I was trying though, just like you. ^_^

This chapter was what I am accustomed to seeing! Yeah, there were a few errors, but the quality was great overall. Get some rest and then 'wow' again us with another chappie! I'm going to reread this one because it's late and I know that I had to have missed some things.

TTFN ^_^

Snow

OMG how could you doubt yourself this story is awesome. i check this site like three times a day to see if you've updated

More please.

You are really a good writer and this is really a good story. Being a storyteller is a great gift and skill. I hope you keep writing all your life and I hope I get to read it all.