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Wow! Now those were some intense moments..... I love the story I can't wait for Kagome to say his name it might be a shock for Sesshoumaru to know that he bedded his hanyou brothers miko... What a world to wake up to... Man I can't wait much longer the need to read is so so unreal.... But hey, you have done a great story and the chapters are fantastic keep up the awesome work....

OMG!!! NOW IT GETS GOOD AND YOU LEAVE ME ON A CLIFFY?!?!?!?! so she was from the fuedal era in the story..and he didn't recognize her at the club or the scent??? well, it had been 500 hundred years, eh? oh well, anywho, updates soon! I BEG OF YOU!! *dies from cliffy* please!

first of all there is nothing wrong with your writing it's fine and i am disapointed that we don't get to see there interaction in this chapter, cuz it means more agonized waiting, but take your time if it makes u feel more comfortable. If your next chapters are going to be anyting like what you had previosuly...haha then you don't need to worry about a THING! Please update soon!!!!

Oh boy, oh boy, what a chapter! I can't wait till you update again. This story just keeps getting better and better.

mmmm dark and dangerous :) great story! I can't wait for the next chapter...battleground office space.

Wow. I loved it. I was just browsing and got caught up in your fic. I can't believe that you ended this chapter at such a place!!! Actually it was the perfect end to the chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Sitting on the edge of the seat waiting, and waiting and its happened. He saw her, the one that brings the beast out of him. Lol
Anger? Surprise, this tension, this feeling that Kagome is going to get it good, long and hard. Hmm is she going to run is she going to be continuing defint towards him, and is he going to still hunt her...all the things I await as you contine to write. I'm a fan darling keep it up.

This is a great story. It's one of the only really interesting ones I've come across lately. You have no reason to what so ever to doubt yourself. Even if you can't always see it, trust me, your talent is evident. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm surprised (pleasantly) that he had the strength to let her go. And her 'friend' should be ashamed! A friend like that is worse than an enemy. At least They don't rationalize that "It's good for you." (disgusted face)... As for the comments... well, a pup's a pup. I just don't like the insecurity (and lack of control) that comes with being a hanyou. Sounds cute. And as for originality, both Hanyou, Youkai, AND Human children have been done. I even read a fic once where the result was a Neko because she had some in her acestry! I wonder how far into her pregnancy she'll be before he finds out? Halfway would be original. Can't think of a fic that had that. Hope his instincts go berserk. I Love protective instincts. heh.

Oh, and before I forget again, I didn't even realize that this was close to Cannon! I like that.