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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person Ruth
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok I have read your story now please tell me that you are not ending it there? I want to see what is going to happen please let me know.. and I can't wait for the next chapter. there better be a next chapter.
person teilza
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!AWSOME!AWSOME!MORE MORE MORE! THIS STORY IS FRIKEN SWEET!LOVE IT!
person Satine457
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love love love love your story ! Please update soon !
person Jeni
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CLIFFYS ARE EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
....i want my sesshy......v.v....
person Black_widow (notsignedin)
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I AM OUTRAGED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUCH AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!! I DEMAND AN UPDATE THIS INSTANT!! (geez, this whole outrage is making me forget how to spell....lol) BUT WHILE I WAIT, I WILL READ YOUR STORY OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN!! BUT I STILL WANT AN UPDATE!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!*sob sob sob* I'M BEGGIN' YA'!!
so yeah...your story is super hot...the writing is ok, but it seems like most of the time you write in huge pharagraphs...but aside from that (huge paragraphs make my eyes hurt) you are a wonderful writer...*sigh* i am deeply satisfied...i havn't been able to find a good fanfic in a while, and NOW I HAVE!! I'M SO HAPPy...heh heh..I'll review again when you update! ttyl.
person sora M.
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah...the plot thickens even more!!!!!!...please update!!!
person Jenn
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god what a good story i can not wait for the rest i did not stop reading until i had no more to read it stinks really i was waiting for her to find out who he really was (SHESSY) and when she does their is no more to read :( i guess i will just have to wait :(
great story.
person Sweetcakes
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now when someone is afraid for one of their own characters my curiosity goes into overload (you may not own Rumiko's Kagome, but you control this one)
I've been waiting for this meeting and have to say that I'm not dissappointed!
Thank you for clearing up what happened to Kagome and the world she lives in, now. Things concerning Seshy's looks and behavior make tons of sense!
Don't put yourself down as a writter either! You are doing an excellent job. The lemons are hot and everything flows. It's not choppy and hard to follow, and believe me I've read some crap.
This is your baby and don't rush your writting, even though your fans will go nuts in anticipation, belive me, in the end we'll love you for it that much more. Even if we bitch and grumble.
P.S = Watch your spelling. ^_^
person Airy
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally Sessh knows. Great chapter, I'm looking foward to reading the next one I'm sure it will be amazing.
person autumngold
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to write more!! This story is incredible!! Please don't let Sesshoumaru reject Kagome now that he knows who she is!! Please update asap!!