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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!! Ahh!! Soo good!! Please up-date soon!! I have to know what happens next!!!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update. Its been a few weeks and im on edge here! if there is one thing I hate more then a stupid sad mary sue story, is a good story that has caught my intrest and an author who can't update it regulary! This nis not a flame, just an encurragment to update and soon. I have a bunch of my friends reading this and they are getting frustrated because they wanna know whats going to happen next. *huffs* please update soon.
Dawna Sama
Dawna Sama
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story my heart was racing the whole time i read this i soooo can't wait for the next chapter. i never review on this site but your story was just to good to deny.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear to you right now. Should you so ask, I will marry you!
LOL jk
This is the second story of yours I've read, and I have to give you kudos for knowing how to make things so descriptive that you can see them occuring, instead of just reading about them.
Please post another chapter soon.
M
LOL jk
This is the second story of yours I've read, and I have to give you kudos for knowing how to make things so descriptive that you can see them occuring, instead of just reading about them.
Please post another chapter soon.
M
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah another chapter. kool. OMG what a cliffy . WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ok im good update ssooooooonnnnn
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no. You are so-ho-HOOO, not stopping there, right? That's just...terrible! Luv, I'm a bit of a hopeless romantic, so this needs an ending. Good or bad-preferably good.
Oh, and you're killin' me. It's spelled 'paced' or 'pacing.' I swear.
^^ LaterZ!
Oh, and you're killin' me. It's spelled 'paced' or 'pacing.' I swear.
^^ LaterZ!
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, nice background explanation. And if he thinks he can control her I hope he gets a rude awakening. There has to be Some give and take Puppy Boy! (heh)
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really Enjoy your writting i hope you keep it up because i will keep reading
your fan
winry_babe
your fan
winry_babe
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, we are getting to the meeting. I know Sesshoumaru realizes it's 'her', but will she be able to recognize him? Such angst to come. As to your story telling, I like it. There's some spelling booboo's and the part where she discussed her past as a possible fantasy, so to speak, felt a little rushed. Kinda lost me for a moment. But, all in all I am very much enjoying the plot. The more you write, the better you get! Can't wait! Hope you update asap!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh!! I have to know what happens next!! Ah, please up-date soon!! I have to know what happens next!!!